[Frog]

Still trying to loosen up my super-clean style, it's getting a bit rougher but I think I've still got a long way to go...



Crits and suggestions welcome.

[Agrajag]

Neat image! Rare style, having these ultra-clean lines with hand-shaded coloring. It looks very nice, even more since you obviously are able to do both well.
There is one thing that jumps out:
In the spot where that neck-muscle, the 'Sterno Mastoid' (-> Andrew Loomis, Figure Drawing for all it's worth hehe ) meets the shirt, the collar should have a sort of bump in it (to follow the three-dimensional form). Right now, it appears to be flat there. But that may be part of the style.

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That is, if you wish to make that muscle that long, which it prolly wouldn't need to be...
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[ August 15, 2002: Message edited by: Agrajag ]

[Max]

Cute girl.

Nice colorscheme.
Just the background could be a bit softer.

nice pic !

-max

[Frog]

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In the spot where that neck-muscle, the 'Sterno Mastoid' (-> Andrew Loomis, Figure Drawing for all it's worth hehe ) meets the shirt, the collar should have a sort of bump in it (to follow the three-dimensional form). Right now, it appears to be flat there. But that may be part of the style.

Haha, no, not part of the style. A mistake

Thanks for pointing it out.

The bg though, I wanted quite rough. I like people like Dermot Power at the moment so I'm trying to incorporate a little of that rough painterly style into my work without actually ripping the guy off. My normal drawing style is super clean, I'm also trying to break out of that a bit for variety's sake. My previous attempts were awful, so this is getting a bit better now but I still have some way to go...