Sijun Forums :: View topic - sci-fi elven woman

Mindsiphon · Posted: Fri Aug 09, 2002 9:58 pm

This is one of a few images I am doing for a client. It's for a fantasy/sci-fi project.
c&c much appreciated.

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[ August 09, 2002: Message edited by: mindsiphon ]

oDD · Posted: Sat Aug 10, 2002 3:51 am

i like it very much , nothing wrong with this pic for me.

lel · Posted: Sat Aug 10, 2002 4:33 am

Very good rendering, so smooth, yet not lifeless. The neck seems long, perhaps ok with elves?

blok · Posted: Sat Aug 10, 2002 4:46 am

looks fantastic, only one crit her chin looks a bit wide, other than that it looks great.

Torstein Nordstrand · Posted: Sat Aug 10, 2002 5:41 am

I like your handling of light on her dress. Her stance looks good as well. Consider widening her left lower arm though, it seems a bit thin compared to the other.

Thanks,

dogfood · Posted: Sat Aug 10, 2002 7:12 am

It looks very good, but her right hand is resting on a dozen cream-filled donuts and four triple thick chocolate shakes. She has got some POOCH sticking out above the belt.

Also, the purple lightning is dominating the one side. A little balance on the far side would work quite well.

JProvost · Posted: Sat Aug 10, 2002 7:55 am

Excellent work. Love the highlights.

Since no one else is going to risk sounding like a perv, I guess I'll go for it. Her crotch looks sunken or something. I think if you brightened up that area just below the belt a little, it would better suggest the curve from her abdomen to her... uh... underside. Right now that whole area looks like it's further back from her legs.

Mindsiphon · Posted: Sun Aug 11, 2002 10:00 am

oDD: Thanks

lel: The way the collar is may give the impression that the neck is thinner and longer than it really is. Either that or it is too long. I tried lowering her head a bit but it looked strange.

blok: yeah it does look a bit wide. Nedd to fix that.

Torstein Nordstrand: Good call. I'll need to fix that too.

dogfood: No you're wrong! It was a pepperoni and extra cheese pizza and a large side order of mozzerella sticks washed down with 2 super size soft drinks.

Gotta fix that too.

Should't the purple light be more dominant on the right side as there is more purple light shining through the window on the right? I could be wrong but that's the logic I used when adding the back light on the figure.

JProvost: Thanks
I actually questioned that myself before posting it. I'll be fixing that too.

The Magic Pen · member Member # Joined: 05 Dec 2001 Posts: 321

Outside of the slightly masculine face I think it looks good

Asurfael · Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2002 9:02 am

Looks really nice to me. Besides what's been mentioned, I think the background on our left side looks a bit "fuzzy" because it has so many lines. Making it just a bit more simplistic would draw more attention to the girl instead of the galactic fogs in a window behind her. The girl looks nice though. I like the face, maybe just because it is a bit masculine. That face suits her "attitude" that's reflected from the position. Good work, keep it up.