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snok
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 25, 2002 3:53 am     Reply with quote
Advice....thanks
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 25, 2002 4:01 am     Reply with quote
Looks good,
good job value-wise (light & shadow)
main problem is the space between the upperlip and the nose is too large, I assume its wrong because otherwise it looks like a fairly realistic portrait, not a caricature.
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snok
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 26, 2002 1:39 am     Reply with quote
please Advice...thanks
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 26, 2002 10:32 pm     Reply with quote
it seems that his jaw is a bit too long. I edited your image a little bit and roughly in the photoshop (hope u not gonna get mad at me for taking a liberty at doing this), to see what would happen if that jaw would be just a little bit shorter, and here is the result... this was just an experiment. I might have even overdid with the shortening... he should have more upper lip. Otherwise your picture is great, Just my 2 cents



[ July 26, 2002: Message edited by: DeepFish ]
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