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J. Tsang
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 Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2002 7:56 pm |
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this is my latest work
trying different technique here with different brush stroke and color.
'green and pink' is the title of this painting.
critiques are always welcome
thks |
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Matt Ryan
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| Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2002 9:39 pm |
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| hmm, there is not much to crit. i cant see your strokes becuase of the compression. i know you are trying something new, but the suject matter isnt very exciting or interesting. i do get a kinda alone feeling looking at this which is cool. maybe if the scene was lit more dynamically it would be interesting...... |
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faeklone
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| Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2002 11:45 pm |
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| I have to agree, you're starting something kewl like and impressionist painting, but I think the idea needs to go through a bit more of refinement. Keep at it though, I have a feeling that it could be a great picture. |
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dogfood
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| Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2002 6:01 am |
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| That box leads the eye off of the bottom of the paper with an almost dizzying velocity. I would have to say (own opinion) that this element isn't helping the composition. |
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wacky
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| Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2002 6:40 am |
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NOT BAD!  |
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