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Author   Topic : "Cerberus *Touched Up* C&C needed"
rodzilla-x
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 11, 2002 7:05 pm     Reply with quote
I posted the body of my concept of cerberus in wip but yeah ive been doing alot of work on it. (this is my first actualy full colored piece of work so yeah) i was really not satified with the heads on the dog so i redid them. Im about 80% complete of the their but im having problems with the angle but i think i got it nailed down now. Anyways here are 2 of the 3 heads

ill post the third head sometime later 2day or tomorrow. Ne ways C&C plz. hehe i ll prob use it for my site layout later on .. again this is my first so yeah am i doing ne thing wrong?

[ July 23, 2002: Message edited by: rodzilla-x ]
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rodzilla-x
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 18, 2002 9:47 am     Reply with quote
finally finished my first piece of artwork.

finished the third head, i dunno something looks wrong with the middle .. ne ways im just gonna leave it at that i think ... c&c plz thz
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 18, 2002 2:28 pm     Reply with quote
looks pretty good. You could add some higlights. Especialy on teeth.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 18, 2002 2:35 pm     Reply with quote
Hehe I read Cerebus(the Aardvark) not Cerberus. Highlights would help bringing out the form or at least brighter spots. The lines between the eyes and rest of the face is kinda blurry and more tightening would do great stuff.

I am also not really seeing where the light source is coming from.

But keep it up.
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rodzilla-x
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 22, 2002 10:19 pm     Reply with quote
ok ive touched it up with the comments u have made but gonna redo a whole head the firrst... I know this should be in work in progress sorry but i thought i was done the first time :P. But i relized i did all the heads different so im trying to fix it up cause i wasnt happy with it at all.

THe first head isnt finished as u can see but i need help on perspective of the second head and the first head placement and sketch does it look ok?

if someone can could u move this to wip? so sorry. Ne ways yeah the next post after this will = finish


this look better than original? is it too dark?


desprit for c&c planning to use this image in my layout for my site cerberusonline.com so just wanted to know if ne thing is wrong b4 i finish up thx!

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