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ELLioT
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I got some room left in the bottom of the pic to add some 3 or 4 lines of text. I m not used to poetry especially in english, if you feel inspired, go on. Let's consider this as collaboration.
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Malachi Maloney
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| Posted: Thu Jul 18, 2002 5:16 am |
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Very odd. I really like it.
Good work as usual.
~M~ |
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Nik
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| Posted: Thu Jul 18, 2002 8:00 am |
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very wierd....i love it though  |
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Rat
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| Posted: Thu Jul 18, 2002 10:05 am |
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Cool style. Thought I might write a quick haiku, since I've got some time to kill:
The moon shines on high
As she awaits her love's cry
Of his lust nearby.
[edit]Just thought of a less repetitive word for the last line.
[ July 18, 2002: Message edited by: Rat ] |
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rippleboxer
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| Posted: Thu Jul 18, 2002 10:42 am |
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i don't want to die like this she cried
black and blue but still beating inside
lost some time.
who said it's not a race?
beautiful girl with the moonlit face. |
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Flash Solaar
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| Posted: Thu Jul 18, 2002 5:52 pm |
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It's a Picasso, indeed!!! (but maybe a false one) 
I'm not a poete too, but here my contribution :
To pay her rent
she waiting for men
completely naked... Indeed! |
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ELLioT
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| Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2002 5:46 am |
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Thanx a lot to every one!
I m glad you participated. All your poems are great (FlashSolaar, you should try in french, I guess  ).
I'll make a poll at eatpoo to help me choose...
For now, I wait for more participants, go on! |
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NeoFun
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| Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2002 1:28 pm |
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| Your stuff is amazing |
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Flash Solaar
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| Posted: Sun Jul 21, 2002 10:37 am |
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As you wish, I try in French!
Un jour... C'�tait la nuit...
Sans un mot, elle s'�crit :
"Ciel!!! Je suis nue!..."
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