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Author   Topic : "Tribute to Spooge Demon"
Weeks
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 12, 2002 4:34 am     Reply with quote
I do my best

Don't you remember...?

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Ogereye
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 12, 2002 8:24 am     Reply with quote
hm like the style. but the eyes are not right..or?
and the moth is not ehm vertical? ^_�
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Awetopsy
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 12, 2002 8:26 am     Reply with quote
I dont agree with above post. I like the fact that his face is not symmetrical. I kinda like that his mouth is crooked. I think its a good painting. The only thing I think I would crit is that its too dark for the white background...... put some sails in the back and a nice blue sky with a few whipy cloud.
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Tinusch
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 12, 2002 8:41 am     Reply with quote
I think it looks great as well. No complaints about the eyes or mouth, I think that considering the perspective, the eyes are spot on, and the mouth looks just fine to me. The body is a little sketchy and sloppy, which detracts from the face a bit, and like Awe said, the white background could go. But I really like the style you have going here.
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Gimbal8
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 12, 2002 9:16 am     Reply with quote
Well if it isn't ol' smelly beard himself! He must have escaped the trap. Arrrrgge!

Interesting color usage. I like it. Although maybe some pinkish should go above his lip on the left there next the nose where all the orange is.
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latsami
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 12, 2002 9:48 am     Reply with quote
i think the nose should point more on our right
white background doesn't suit the pic, it hurts my eyes ! *o* lol
but u did a nice job.
I'd like to see some of your art where drawing or colors are yours. ^^
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Weeks
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 12, 2002 12:36 pm     Reply with quote
Ogereye : thank you. You know i did'nt take a long time to draw
this Spooge's painting.
In fact, i wanted to learn about the way he
paints.
That's why it is not so perfect as i wanted.
And maybe i have a little prob' with my monitor (distortion)

Awetopsy : thank you too..
As i wrote before, it is a spooge's creation,
and it was just a try. Look for the original.

Tinusch : thank you very much.
Aahh..! this crit makes me feel good.

Gimbal8 : Of course you're right !
I can learn from your crit too..

Latsami : you ought to see the original..
Soon, you'll see my own work, but i am not ready to
show...

* j'vois que t'es h�berg� chez free... comme moi...?*
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latsami
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 12, 2002 1:15 pm     Reply with quote
et vi free c cool :3
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