[neff]

Well, uhm i know the right arm perspective is wrong, but i am too stupid to fix it :-(,
and the colors doesnt fit allright and my english is bad, but hey i lke to see some c&c's

[dead]

The detail in the drawing is great. It's a shame that you can't see it in the colored version.

[neff]

Is there someone who could support me witz the lights plz?
Some people told me they were wrong placed and so on.

[Svanur]

The sketch is great. The detail and styles remind a little of Duck's artwork.

Yes, the lighting is really off, I can't even see what is the focal point of lighting. You should decide, before you paint, where the major sources of light are. The most obvious light is his sword as it seems to be glowing. Then you should decide whether there is any other lights, like sunshine, moonlight or any other ambient light source. It all depends on how you manage to see the image in 3D. If you have had any life drawing classes you should be able to use those same lessons to decide the "3-Dness" of the object.

I hope this helps.

[neff]

Thank you

Uhm i've forgot the glowing sword, good idea.

And Yes Duke is a great artist,
perhabs he inspired me