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sparth member
Member # Joined: 14 Jun 2002 Posts: 343 Location: Seattle
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Posted: Sun Jul 07, 2002 11:40 pm |
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did a more personal version of something i was working on, at the office.
no photos were used for the head, no sketching either, all wacom.... i'm not used to do it this way, it turned out pretty well. hope you like it.
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gArGOyLe^ member
Member # Joined: 11 Jan 2002 Posts: 454 Location: USA
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Posted: Sun Jul 07, 2002 11:44 pm |
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Very nice...
if you can zoom in and fix it up and give it more details this could become veryy good..
also the leg closer to us looks a little weird..
I like the helmet the most..
and the colors are awesome great job!
[ July 07, 2002: Message edited by: gArGOyLe^ ] |
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Mon Jul 08, 2002 12:03 pm |
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feet need work and the heads a bit small but I like the painting technique. |
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jayceeL member
Member # Joined: 23 Oct 2001 Posts: 154 Location: UK
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Posted: Mon Jul 08, 2002 12:19 pm |
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Hi Sparth, I really like your work and this one is no exeption. Cool Design!
Crits:
I think you should rotate his right leg more towards the camera (the angle looks wrong) Make his hands a little bigger, makes him look more masculine. There is also a few things wrong with the perspective of the eyes and I not too keen on the "big" lower lip. (probably just too flat)
Hope you don't mind the critizism.
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GO junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Apr 2002 Posts: 39 Location: TOKYO
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Posted: Mon Jul 08, 2002 3:13 pm |
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like the design. right foot looks weird though... |
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sparth member
Member # Joined: 14 Jun 2002 Posts: 343 Location: Seattle
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Posted: Mon Jul 08, 2002 3:40 pm |
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tx for the feedbacks peeps.
true, this concept could have been done with a little more attention, in fact, i did it first with the idea it would remain some sort of speed painting experience.
i'll try to work on it with all your advices...  |
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