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sparth
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 07, 2002 11:40 pm     Reply with quote
did a more personal version of something i was working on, at the office.
no photos were used for the head, no sketching either, all wacom.... i'm not used to do it this way, it turned out pretty well. hope you like it.

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gArGOyLe^
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 07, 2002 11:44 pm     Reply with quote
Very nice...

if you can zoom in and fix it up and give it more details this could become veryy good..

also the leg closer to us looks a little weird..

I like the helmet the most..

and the colors are awesome great job!

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 08, 2002 12:03 pm     Reply with quote
feet need work and the heads a bit small but I like the painting technique.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 08, 2002 12:19 pm     Reply with quote
Hi Sparth, I really like your work and this one is no exeption. Cool Design!

Crits:
I think you should rotate his right leg more towards the camera (the angle looks wrong) Make his hands a little bigger, makes him look more masculine. There is also a few things wrong with the perspective of the eyes and I not too keen on the "big" lower lip. (probably just too flat)

Hope you don't mind the critizism.

JayCeeL
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 08, 2002 3:13 pm     Reply with quote
like the design. right foot looks weird though...
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sparth
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 08, 2002 3:40 pm     Reply with quote
tx for the feedbacks peeps.
true, this concept could have been done with a little more attention, in fact, i did it first with the idea it would remain some sort of speed painting experience.
i'll try to work on it with all your advices...
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