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Dennis Sedov
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 26, 2002 2:21 am     Reply with quote
Here is something I've been working on for the past... well 2-3 weeks. Flying cars and people are comming up!

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ceenda
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 26, 2002 3:34 am     Reply with quote
Nice work!

A number of crits:

A) There's not much to hint that the scene is essentially Muscovian or even Russian. Could be Paris, Ontario, Hull...

B) I think there needs to be a focus. You mentioned adding in people and vehicles. This is good, as it should give the pic a bit more 'ooomph'.

C) The street corner on the left at the top of the pic screams "BUMP MAPPINGGGGGGGG". Perhaps tone it down a bit?

Very cool though, I like the way you haven't gone for the cliche'd Blade Runner effect with dark skies and chimneys etc.
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Sumaleth
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 26, 2002 8:57 am     Reply with quote
Simple but very effective. I really dig the lighting and readering of it.

He's right about the obvious bump map up top/left though. It's mainly the heavy phong highlight that does it.

Not that you'd notice if there was other stuff in the scene. Looking forward to seeing the next version.
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Sedone
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 26, 2002 11:48 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, you actually had me fooled for a second. I thought it was a photo-manip until I read the comments. Great mood in this picture. I can't wait to see how it looks after you've populated it.
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