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Jeise
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 Posted: Sat Jun 08, 2002 4:53 pm |
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I did this for art class. Some may recognize the name from islamic mythology, and some of the design (caged head) from Vagrant Story, a dungeon rpg.
Any C and/or C would be appreciated.
http://jayontario_2.tripod.com/artings/id46.html |
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cheney
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| Posted: Sat Jun 08, 2002 6:20 pm |
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That is an awesome sketch. Insane awesome. Great work, but the fish tail is kinda strange.
I really really love the trident and the clothing. |
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Jot pepper
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| Posted: Sat Jun 08, 2002 7:57 pm |
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Wow, thats excellent!
But I think cheney is right about the fish tale...the angle seems like it might be a bit off.
Nice value |
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Jeise
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| Posted: Sun Jun 09, 2002 1:07 pm |
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| Thanks, though I don't quite see what you mean about the fish tail, but then again I don't do fish often (at all) so I'm not exactly an expert on the subject. I was looking at a picture of a northern pike though. Yay! |
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Vesuvius
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| Posted: Tue Jun 25, 2002 7:47 pm |
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Anthony
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| Posted: Tue Jun 25, 2002 9:25 pm |
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Hey there! Not bad - how about some more tonal variation? Split the figure into lights and darks, don't make it all grey. My only other crit would be that when I saw the image at first I thought "this guy has a fish swimming up his pants....and he doesn't have any legs...oh, wait" 
Keep it up! |
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