[J-D Leon]

Hi everyone.
this illustration took me forever to finish...
i was stunned when the first time i see her.
especially with this particular dress
)i am not that nationality, i drew her just because she look pretty with that dress(



here is some detail work(add more contrast as u command):


eyes

her back

closer look under her arm

the blue star:

my platform:

larger version of this pic:

[ June 20, 2002: Message edited by: JD Leon ]

[ June 20, 2002: Message edited by: JD Leon ]

[Gygaxis]

I really like the Star of David on the dress, it's about the only thing in the image giving it any depth. The shading seems random. This is probably due to the lack change in value across the figure. There are shadows to indicate folds why not this too?

Judging by the tech, I'd guess this was vector work.

A litle more contrast through the whole figure basically. Especially the face. The features look to be in nice placement, but the face has almost NO shading. This is especially apperent on the far cheek and in the eyes, which flatten out very baddly.

The background doesn't particularlly go with the rest of the image, because it does not appear to be a vector illustration and it kinda throws off the image to combine the two different techniques.

That said, I really like the pose and the outfit they appear to make for a very pretty girl, who needs some minor touchups

[Lunatique]

Interesting style.

You might want to watch the definition of areas like her nose, shoulder, lips..etc. Her eyes might be a tad too pale too.