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Leo
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Hi all,
hope everybody have a nice day...
C&C are highly welcome!
-leo |
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Svanur
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| Posted: Thu Jun 20, 2002 6:26 am |
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That's a really cool pic, a bit minimalistic but still cool. Only thing I find bothersome is his nose.
Keep it up. |
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jr
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| Posted: Thu Jun 20, 2002 6:45 am |
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| really nice feel |
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ceenda
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| Posted: Thu Jun 20, 2002 6:53 am |
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The atmosphere in this pic is fantastic. The clouds are lovely. Not so much the nose that seems odd, rather the chin which seems to be pulled down too low.
Very nice indeed.  |
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[666]Flat
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| Posted: Thu Jun 20, 2002 7:14 am |
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quote:
Originally posted by Leo:
[QB]Hi all,
hope everybody have a nice day...
Seems like you didn't have a nice day, huh? The pic turned out good nevertheless. Or maybe just because of that? Well, think about it this way: the passion and emotion packed into your pictures will still remain when the tears dried up a long time ago.
Keep it tight and do some hos and you be fixed in no time. Regarding the picture: the whole setting combined with the face expression of your char work very well in that context of sentimentality, but it would have been a lot cooler if you had painted his whole upper body instead of just his head and shoulders. You know, that would have given you a lot of possibilities to extend the body language (like clenched fists, tense posing, etc.pp.). |
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henrik
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| Posted: Thu Jun 20, 2002 7:36 am |
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Hey, very nice indeed. I actually agree with Mr Flat here, show more "character" on him.
I don't like the composition, you're showing too much sky. As it is now, the focus is entirely on the sky, which I believe was your purpose.
You might want to check the anatomy on the head, chin is is bit too big, and forehead is to straight.
Good job! |
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Lunatique
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| Posted: Thu Jun 20, 2002 8:24 am |
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| Good one! I think flat is right on with his c&c too. Showing the upper body would've done more for the piece. |
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Diruo
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| Posted: Thu Jun 20, 2002 9:20 am |
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I'm going to call you "Cloud God" from now on..
Awesome as always.. even though I agree with those saying that more of his upper body should be visible. But hey, this way we get to see more of your fantastic clouds!
Keep it up! |
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merlyns
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| Posted: Thu Jun 20, 2002 9:41 am |
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wow I'm amazed, such beaetiful cloud colors and thones It really get's the feel of the pic right good work man I totaly love it its one of the best paintings I saw in a long time .
It kinda reminds me of the newer final fantasy series.
-david |
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