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Topic : ""the dreamer" issue 4 online" |
mechwyn
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 Posted: Sun Jun 16, 2002 10:30 pm |
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Please check it out. I started the comic some month ago... now the #4 is ready and online at my page... http://www.mechwyn.de.vu
...klick there at the button "Comicgeschichten" or at the picture "news"
C&C is welcome... |
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mechwyn
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| Posted: Mon Jun 17, 2002 9:54 pm |
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| no comment?...so bad? |
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Ian Jones
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| Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2002 5:59 am |
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Sorry... ppl are just lazy sometimes. If you had included a pic actually in the post then ppl tend to reply more.
I think its great. You have some talent for storytelling, even though I know a little German, I didn't need it because the images spoke for themselves. Keep working on it and you'll get better and better!
I found myself intrigued enough to look through more than one, which is a good test of its success.
I like the way a character actually dies! fantastic!
It could do with a 'next page' and 'previous page' link at the base of every page.
Overall, it is pretty cool so I would suggest anyone else go take a look!
Hope that helps. |
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[666]Flat
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| Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2002 7:42 am |
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PLANET OF THE APES with ORKS instead of APES! All MIXED UP WITH LOTR! SHHHWEET!!1
Some of your dialogues are pretty lame though (no offense intended). |
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2002 8:18 am |
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hmm... I cant read german(?).. but the art is cool.. looks like you had a real plan and the story is well told just by the images... great work.. I want to see more!!
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mechwyn
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| Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2002 12:20 pm |
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thanx for your replys...
..sorry, but the english version will be done as soon as possible. This episode is only a tiny piece of a bigger story I wrote some time ago...and the next issue will be ready in 2 month... 
...Stimmt schon...am text mu8 ich noch feilen... |
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