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Topic : "Wolverine, ready to scrap in the cage" |
visual myriad member
Member # Joined: 28 Mar 2001 Posts: 150 Location: Sydney, Australia
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Posted: Sun Jun 16, 2002 9:15 am |
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Let's get ready to rummmmmbbbbble!
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-Tepox- member
Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2001 Posts: 352 Location: Finland
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Posted: Sun Jun 16, 2002 10:03 am |
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Nice as always, but you should work more with the Wolverine's eyes. Angrier expression would be better. |
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Angelic Devil junior member
Member # Joined: 16 Jun 2002 Posts: 16 Location: United States
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Posted: Sun Jun 16, 2002 10:15 am |
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Very nice. I love the attitude and feel of the whole image, and the coloring effects. The background is nice and subtle.
The right side of his face, however, seems off. I can't quite place my finger on it, but I think the highlighting isn't very nessassary on the outer lining of his right eye. Also, the contrast between the blue highlighting and the red tints of his skin are throwing it off. Perhaps, a different shade of blue? Also, the right side of his nose seems to not be correctly shaded and it seems as though he has small triangles on it, unless, of course, that was intentional. The nostrils flare out too much, and should not be as wide. The eye should not be as dark. The white area of the eye should still be visible. Also, the body should have a little more definition to make the distinction between the background and the foreground. Also, so there would be more definition from the arm to the torso and chest area.
However, it is very nicely done. ^^ |
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pixelsoldier member
Member # Joined: 18 Dec 1999 Posts: 728 Location: Ontario
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Posted: Sun Jun 16, 2002 2:10 pm |
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Those claws are incredible. Great job simplifying your shapes. |
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visual myriad member
Member # Joined: 28 Mar 2001 Posts: 150 Location: Sydney, Australia
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Posted: Mon Jun 17, 2002 2:58 am |
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Tepox: yes of course, you're very right--need to keep within character. Hadn't ever done him before, so didn't get him this time. Will try again...
Anjelic Devil: thanks--that's a very thorough crit. Sometimes it's good to push the lighting into the theatrical, but maybe this time it doesn't work for you. I lost interest after doing the face, so that probably explains the fading amount of detail (not that that's any excuse). Thanks for taking the time!
Pixelsoldier: thanks--I think it's said claws that have made him such a popular character. I really liked Hugh Jackman's take on him in the X-Men flick, as it was quite understated. But he wasn't hairy enough  |
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Eric Drobile junior member
Member # Joined: 09 Jun 2002 Posts: 38 Location: Florida, Sarasota
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Posted: Mon Jun 17, 2002 11:34 pm |
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....Am I the only one that noticed the guy with the swastica on his head in the backround? |
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