[neff]

quick paintover

[neff]

C'mon, C&C Please,
what have I done to you, I only like to show you some of my newbie works :*-(

[zak]

ok, im gonna crit the guys from left to right
1) left arm waaaaay tooo short. the collarbone area could do with some definition. the mouth maybe a tad too big, but thats up to you really. the perspective on the gun and the hand is odd. the hand looks like its floating about and the gun just seems to be pointing the wrong way. the tatoo looks absolutely awesome ^__^, but if you add subtle highlights, you may get a slightly better effect. nice colouring job too

2) the feet seem a bit too small and a bit too wide for some reason. the legs seem very plain. the muscles need more definition. also seeing from the trousers, he must have really skinny legs. give him slightly baggier trousers. arms again a tad too short again, althou not as much. the knives are a beauty, but the handles could be slightly thicker

3) this guys ears are really huge + you should be able to see a bit of the other ear too. the muscles on the arms a totally out of it, i suggest you check out some reference for that. also check out the collarbone area again. trousers again could be a bit baggier and try to add different types of folds to all the clothing to make it look slightly more interesting.

coming to think of it, that was pretty harsh. i shouldnt be so mean. but generally well done. the only way to better yourself is practise. were all still learning. use those comments as a rough guide. its only my humble opinion

[neff]

Thank u a lot for the critcs :-)
Finally someone who have a look at it.

Well, I'll try on with practising...

[zak]

no prob