[buyuu]

This is my second portrait from life, done a few months ago.. Didnt get the chance to finish it but maybe for the better.
a few problem areas;
eyes, fuzzy nose, chin, some problems with edges (ie shirt, chin/chair/wall), chair behind her should be of much darker value, etc. But I'm pretty happy with it anyway, so feel free to tear it apart.




[ June 06, 2002: Message edited by: buyuu ]

[egerie]

I think it would be worth it to finish it.. It still looks a lot as a WIP but you got a good base.
The nose looks a little too short and there's something strange going on in the right cheek bone area.
I absolutely *LOVE* the palette you chose.
Oh and having different kind of edges is a definate plus (crisp, fuzzy, hard..)

[zak]

i think it works well as a finished piece its got something ghoustly about it but at the same time itsdreamy and warm. but also very serious. you got yourself a nice picture there id pat yourself on the back and have a nice beer

[saladbowl]

1st thought : Hmmmm looks unfinished
2nd thought : shouldn't be touched again, looks good...everybody can draw an exact portrait, but I like it because it's not as detailed as it could be.

I like it!

[buyuu]

Thank you for replying . I think there will be more variety in edges as soon as I learn more about handling the medium...