[Linguar Amadala]

Hello Everyone,

Just curious to get a bit of C&C on a picture.



I have not had any success yet with backgrounds so for me it's done... - anything you can say regarding it is apprecaited.

Thanks,

-Linguar

[ May 27, 2002: Message edited by: Linguar Amadala ]

[Fate]

She has one arm
her ears are detached from her head
her tail is jagged

I know she's suppose to be taking a nap or something but the picture lacks depth, it's like south park and I can't see any indicatino that she has more than one arm

the ear looks very unnatural, maybe cause that's how I used to draw cat ears back in elementary school.
I like the shadings you put here are there, which gives it depth that it needs, but you are missing it on her hand which is probably why her hand look squashed.
your pic lacks excitement: Nothing is really standing out, and even her tail is kinda sitting there, limp, jagged, her legs are too long and too straight which doesn't go well with her 'paw'
maybe I'm being too serious, but that's just what I see.

[Awetopsy]

hmm it needs shadow... and an environment to anchor her to. She needs a nice body pillow under her.. the way a cat would typically take over a cushion or couch...etc.

I like the concept.. but it needs more work. Put some time into it.