[seethemd]

let me know what you think...
(3dsmax4/brazil)

[Bilbo]

i think it looks great. i have three small crits- the first being the composition which is a little too centered- it's basically a bright mass in the center of a dark background. experiment with different formats and image ratios, try cropping it differently.
second crit is the contrast- there's too much grey and midtones.
last but not least- his hand looks like the hand of a female teenager (no offence meant)- it's too small, smooth and delicate, doesn't seem to fit the face of an old, rugged clown.

[Benji Schupp]

Good work! I agree with Bilbo though. He mentioned some very good points. Maybe there is some room for a shiny surface somewhere. I have realized, that shiny things usually look better. But maybe you don't want to use any in this piece. That's fine.

[Scrapster]

Hi, seethemd, very nice work! You�ve got a relly good expression on his face.
I agree with bilbo about the contrast and maybe the hands could be bigger, but overall it looks good.