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aColdOldKodiak · Posted: Sat May 18, 2002 4:45 pm

Almost forgot that I post here too.
Star Wars inspired. (duh)
Um... crit if you like, noone usually crits here so I don't care.

I hate tripod

[ May 18, 2002: Message edited by: aColdOldKodiak ]

SOAP · Posted: Sat May 18, 2002 5:06 pm

image no wookie

tek9z · Posted: Sun May 19, 2002 2:24 am

just love that atmosphere!
just awesome.
only crit is the characters composition:
would have made them smaller to make the image even more 'readable'.

eyewoo · Posted: Sun May 19, 2002 5:29 am

Really like...

Visited your website... you a talented guy!

Imirie · junior member Member # Joined: 18 May 2002 Posts: 5

cool! i really like the atmosphere

collin · Posted: Sun May 19, 2002 6:20 am

That is very good. I like it a lot,

BUT.......(I'll give you a crit since you seem to want one)

Though you did do the background really nice, it gives sortof a fighting game feel to it. For instance the rail repeats itself, Maybe what you should do is adjust one side, like maybe not even have the fighter standing at the end, but give him some stuff behind him, like a slashed up droid or something. Well hopefully you get what I'm saying.

I hope Star Wars beats spiderman in the box office.

aColdOldKodiak · Posted: Sun May 19, 2002 11:06 pm

tek9z> Indeed, orignally I planned a lot "bigger" picture encompassing a really large view with the two charaters, but I lost track at some point. I'll see if I can remedy this now. Thanks

eyewoo> Well I've seen your website before, and so a compliment from someone at your skill makes me really happy

Imirie> Thankie Kindly
Collin> LOL yeah you're right it does look like a fighting game now that you mention it. I think I'll do as you say and see what I can do.