[Quello Velare]

I am just looking to see what people have to say about it.
http://www.raptorclawarts.com/Bludhaven/raptornightwing.jpg

[Prometheus-ANJ]

Here's my fuzzy crit:
I see that the edges around the character is sharp, but the gradiation/edges inside the (character on the legs etc.) are fuzzy on both sides. The gradiations on muscles often start as a gradient but ends as a sharp line where the muscle meets another (and often culminate in a little highlight dot).

The image looks nice btw. No major problems anywhere, just small things here and there.

[Endymia]

Nice choice in a background. I like it..gives a mysterious feel to the artwork.

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[Ian Jones]

Nice pic, great drawing abilites.

What material is the suit he is wearing? If it is spandex.. then you need to render it with sharper highlights. Look for some reference to see what I mean.

ANJ-77 pointed out the fuzzyness problems. You have clean crisp lines on the silhouette of your character (which is good), but no crisp clean areas anywhere else on the character.

See the left arm, the bicep, where it overlaps the rest of his body? there should be a clean sharp edge between those two areas.

Also you need clean edges where the left leg overlaps the right leg. The chest overlaps the right arm aswell... that also needs a clean edge. not to mention the jaw line aswell.

You need to have clean edges there, so that it helps a viewer to recognise that there are two forms overlapping, rather than two blending together. See my point? a clean edge serves as a good visual indicator
that there is a division between forms.

Hope that helps.

[ May 11, 2002: Message edited by: Ian Jones ]

[nevanlinna]

Very nice picture. U got the idea from spiderman? hu=)
Looks like you miss one step of your picture, the last, make edges clean, and sharp, otherwise i think it's very good, anatomy also seems to be right!

[NiM]

Nice the fuzzyness has already been pointed out... thing i like best about this picture is actually the texture on the roof bellow the character, where the 'shadow' falls... very nicely done..