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jesusclone
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PostPosted: Mon May 06, 2002 6:30 pm     Reply with quote
I'm pretty happy with it, but I'm sure with all the leetness floating around here somebody won't hehe. Very open to suggestion though

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Novacaptain
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PostPosted: Mon May 06, 2002 6:46 pm     Reply with quote
i like it, though the beams of light look like they're on the same plane. The reflection looks niceand that's one cool frog. Maybe you could try to put in more colors in the picture. Some reds, yellows and blues would be nice. The shadows, could for example be a bluer shade of green and the light could have a little bit of orange to it. That floating leaf is interesting, maybe you could add some more of those to get more color variation too. I like the texture on the tree, looks good! but the log that the frog sits on seems a wee bit smooth.
It think it would be better to have more significant contrast in the foreground than in the background. Do more
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ken
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PostPosted: Tue May 07, 2002 10:25 am     Reply with quote
hey, finally finished. looks great man, you're improving in leaps and bounds. one thing - all the areas seem to be very separated and distinct. your grass needs deeper texturing so it doesn't look like a lawn. the water turned out really well and the floating leaf is a nice touch.

-Ken
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