[Dan]

okay, here's another one of those b and white pictures like over at the medievil pictures thready. I tried to post one of mine earlier, but somehow it got deleted. If it was deleted by a moderator, could I atleast get some reason why? Anyways here it is.
first try

second try

[iByrn]

Interesting. I especially like the perspective on the second one. Sorry, I can't really find anything to critique.

[Eric Pommer]

The first one IS in the medieval thread...probably better to keep them all there for best results. I especially like the second one...the mouth with hints of teeth is great!

[cheney]

Thats great. Its like a comic painting. I love the style and the concept.

[Dan]

I guess the key thing to remember is not to have lines represented by black lines. Rather use the edge between black and white space to be your lines. I did this a lot better in the second one.

[digitalmar]

Man, I love this style! Anyway, I was working on this yesterday and when I saw this new thread I just had to post.
I agree the second one is definitely better. I guess we were thinking the same thing because I came up with almost the same perspective as you did.
Here's my feeble first attempt:


My friend's little girl just got bit by a dog last week and this is how I think she may remember it. . .

Thanks for posting this fresh tread! Make some more!