[Hoak]

This is my first attempt at doing a CG where the finished product doesn't have "lines", so it is supposed to resemble more of a finished "digital painting" rather than just coloring and shading lineart.

I realize that I have a long ways to go, and that this isn't anywhere near a professional level. But I really enjoy doing this and want to improve, so any comments on what i did good or what I didn't do so good would be appreciated.

The original lineart was NOT done by me. It was drawn by an artist called GoldSeven. I am merely the CG'er I hope everyone reads this far down to realize that =)

[saladbowl]

Hmmmm, it looks good, but the characters have more...hmmm..."personality" in the sketch.
Some of that got lost.
Anyway, I like it.

[Hoak]

Yeah, I am still figuring out how to maintain good character in the faces. The eyes were hard to make look "alive", but I am still learning and trying things..