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stevethomas
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 23, 2002 5:39 pm     Reply with quote
Just my latest image. c+c are welcome.

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gArGOyLe^
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 23, 2002 5:50 pm     Reply with quote
Very nice... only crit that I might squeeze out is that theres not much sense of depth?

Good job
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jr
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 23, 2002 6:06 pm     Reply with quote
this looks very good, but i think you can make the clouds alittle more fluffy, and softer. just a suggestion though. see if you can do that and still keep your style, see how wyeth (sp?) does it.
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gArGOyLe^
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 23, 2002 6:24 pm     Reply with quote
the wings and backbone are aweeesome!
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madmouth
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 24, 2002 3:47 pm     Reply with quote
god, that is superb. I love it.
for the depth thing, if you made the rocks darker behind him it would help.
I don't really care though, it's amazing.
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stevethomas
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 24, 2002 5:40 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks everybody. You are all right about the clouds and depth of field business. More fluff would be good. I think they look more like porridge than clouds, but I was done.
madmouth: Glad you liked it so much!
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daz199
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 24, 2002 8:10 pm     Reply with quote
awesome!
since its kinda afternoonish..you should saturate the colors a bit more maybe, and some more contrast
play around with it
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nevanlinna
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 24, 2002 8:55 pm     Reply with quote
yeah. very nice picture. I think it would help if you had a darker backround, and softer clouds. Those clouds looks a bit like smoke, or something....you see?
But otherwise, very good!
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nevanlinna
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 24, 2002 9:05 pm     Reply with quote
hey again.
this is what I did quikly, a paintover. I think those clouds looks better in this, just my opinion, and....check it yourself..
here comes...
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horstenpeter
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 25, 2002 2:31 am     Reply with quote
God, this is a beautiful image. I'm rapidly falling in love with it. Great style. Love the flower pieces he's got, makes the thing so sentimental without getting into kitsch.

Only thing I'm not sure about is the hard edge between the light and dark parts of the clouds.

But really great work.
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Godwin
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 25, 2002 6:53 am     Reply with quote
clouds look much better here, really nice, but what's in the hand? sunlight?
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Awetopsy
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 25, 2002 8:37 am     Reply with quote
clouds do look really good.. Ive never been able to succesfully paint fluffy clouds.. Ill learn one day.

a really great image you haev going on here.
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