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The Fritz
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 Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 2:25 pm |
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Hi, this is a character I did for a software company. It's going to be used for a strategic computer game where you have to struggle in the hard daily buisness of a company. Would like to tell more, but you now how it is. This character is the chief secretary and a real b...., her only goal is to be cruel. Sorry for the german text, it's a german company. So what do you think is she mean enough, does she need some other details? Let me know...
Plz follow the link:
http://www.angelfire.com/art2/different_view/pic5.html |
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BlackPool
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| Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 2:43 pm |
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| For what your going for, I think what you have pretty much does it. So I think it looks fine. The only changes I think I would make would be to make her a little more gaudy. Like make her earings bigger and some ruge on her cheeks, or perhaps put her hair up in a tight bun like a dominatrix. But really I think such changes just go to personal prefrence and so aren't really necessary unless you just want to experiment. |
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Morbid Guy
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| Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 4:17 pm |
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Great job Fritz, she looks pretty bitchy to me  Maybe she could of been holding something in one of her hands to add to her character, not sure what exactly, notepad or something. Looks great tho. |
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saladbowl
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| Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 4:24 pm |
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Hmmm, when I scroll down and cut of her head, she is almost to hot to be the ugly bitch she is! 
Maybe a fat butt or sth like that would help.
Gruss nach Berlin...
[ April 21, 2002: Message edited by: AP[ol]LO ] |
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The Fritz
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| Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2002 4:25 am |
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Hey thx for reply...
@BlackPool: The rouge is a good idea, I will try to convert it.
@Morbid Guy: I allready had a scetch of her with a ruler in her hand (to slap others), but it looked to much like a teacher, notepads, calculater and so on made somewhat less aggressive. I agree that somethig in her hands would be fine, but what??
@AP[ol]Lo: I still wanted her to be somehow attractive, to give her a - I say it in german - straffen Look, because she is still a smart bitchy girl, fat ones tend to look dull (well, my point of view). Btw, did you go to the USA for better chances for a job or are you born in the USA, just curios
Thx for the ideas!! |
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