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The Green Man
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 Posted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 6:28 pm |
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I'm sure we've all had days like this where the competition of our profession...or in my case education gets the best of us.  |
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ANN
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| Posted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 6:41 pm |
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I like this pic of graphic design!
It's really cool.
The color is very good.  |
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NiM
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| Posted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 6:45 pm |
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| Deep.. nice atmosphere to the background.. the words scared me, lol |
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SplitSoul
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| Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 9:51 am |
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| I like it, but the typo... it doesn't work for me. Otherwise, it's really nice. |
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The Green Man
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| Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 12:26 am |
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Hey ANN thanks comming from you that means a lot...I'm a big fan of your work.
NiM: thanks also I was trying to get deep on this one..I find that a lot of what I do these days are geared towards a comercial end...I wanted to do somthing that depicted how I felt at the moment.
SplitSoul: do you have a problem with the font or the text in general...I fought with my self about the text...but in the end I felt the words conveyed the subject matter best.
Thanks for the comments..I'd love to hear more!  |
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scylla
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| Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 6:15 am |
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Yeah i'm with SplitSoul...
there's something that just isn't right about the typography...not sure what though?
Maybe it's the drop shadow (that's what striked me as being a bit off first), the contrasting white, or the choice of font. Maybe vary it a bit more (but not too much). You have used the same font (i think? I can't refer back to the image while i type this). You've manipulated the proportions of it, which is nice...maybe by changing one or two of the lines to a different font will add a bit of flavour and variation, could also maybe emphasise what the line is saying.
Just my amerture suggestions....(i'm not very good meself so might not be a good idea to take them into consideration? hehe) |
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