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Author   Topic : "POTW2 - the cloudy bay area"
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 3:05 pm     Reply with quote
Well...this is the second of my weekly painting series. well...fourth actually - but the second since i began counting - oh whatever.

It took me quite a while to get an idea of what to paint. I really need to get myself a digital (or regular) camera to take more reference shots to work with. My family photo albums are running dangerously low on good landscape photos. heheh

I couldn't resist adding a "little" satelite dish in the distance. Catpain flushgarden's matte kept poking on my inner eyes while i was thinking of what to put there.



c,c,p/o will be very appreciated.
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 3:54 pm     Reply with quote
yum

imho, it seems too simple- the water looks too flat. nature is pretty unpredictable though, so it's not a real comment

perhaps a bit more texture work?

[ April 19, 2002: Message edited by: Mr. T ]
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 6:16 pm     Reply with quote
yup. kinda looks like ice... the docks are ugly btw
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 8:14 pm     Reply with quote
how's this?

thanks for the comment you two. The boats should take your eyes off the docks i hope *har har har*
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 6:57 pm     Reply with quote
I agree with Mr.T, it's a bit simple IMO
I think maybe a lighthouse somewhere in there would help add some variety

I know you do a really good job of making believable vegitation... so uhm yeah do more of that please

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 4:46 am     Reply with quote
I like it very much, even though it might be too simple to some eyes I like it as is. Especially that satellite dish in the back
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 4:59 am     Reply with quote


I guess this should "fix" most of the issues...Does anyone have any suggestions regarding values? I'd really like to hear them.
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