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ANN
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 Posted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 10:22 am |
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It's another pic about Beijing~~~~
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NiM
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| Posted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 10:34 am |
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Interesting, i like the use of colors on this one...
And to think that i wont be able to go to Beijing with my club and Luis Linn this summer to train on 'the wall'.. *sigh* what i wouldnt do to go there  |
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| Posted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 3:20 pm |
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that's nice...i wish i was sitting there having a little sunshine as food. comforting picture.
My critique isn't really about the picture, more about the text.
Maybe changing one of the "food" to "meal/lunch/snack/etc" would make it sound nicer when read. The repetition of the word "food" seems a little dull to me.
keep up the nice work ann. |
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ANN
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| Posted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 6:33 pm |
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thank you for the nice words!
You are welcome to Beijing!I think it's the place where you must come in your life 
Novacaptain :Thank you for the suggestion!I always have no idea about the text.they are some pics about"food and drink"for an Europe magazine.But you know,I'm not sensetive to English.So I need such advice indeed.
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| Posted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 11:04 pm |
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Oh, another Beijing painting, very good.
Nice colouring again. They're like postcards, you've created a nice mood in your paintings.
What do you use to do this, and how long does it usually take? |
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