Sijun Forums :: View topic - The cover of my collection.It's not like my usual style

ANN · Posted: Sat Apr 06, 2002 12:57 am

I did it very happy.the style relaxed me.do you like it?

AcjBizar · Posted: Sat Apr 06, 2002 6:59 am

I really like the individual drawings, but I'm not too fond of the way the words are placed between them.

EviLToYLeT · Posted: Sat Apr 06, 2002 9:13 am

Yah, I don't like where cartoon, graphic design, architecture and comix are placed. (in case you didn't do it on purpose, comix is actually spelled comics)

I think it might be more effective if you placed one letter above each small picture.

looks good though.

Molako_Plus · Posted: Sat Apr 06, 2002 10:09 am

pic's are cool.......but the whole piece isnt effective in its design.

theres too many squares to look at right theer at once. i suggest in each row to keep one square the way it is and the rest change the opacity or blur it. then the words: graphic design or comix can start above the normal squares. would kinda help your eyes out and guide them from one area to the other.

MarcusX · Posted: Sun Apr 07, 2002 12:31 am

Its pretty neat I think..
But the Words are not necesary(sp?) .. it will become rather obvious once they open it and look.. if you want the words on front try to put them under the "ann�s art book"
and altough it is supposed to be comic style.. IMO change font.
Also if you remove the word in between the small pics.. it will seem less crowded

[ April 06, 2002: Message edited by: MarcusX ]

ANN · Posted: Sun Apr 07, 2002 5:56 am

Oh!Thanks thanks!I really need these ideas.I's my frist touch with graphic design ,suggestion are welcome.
I have got your advice.Let me try again,I believe i can do better.