[Dr. Bang]

Coment and critique about my pic are very welcome! Can be anything!

Thanks



Old version here http://www.eatpoo.com/bang/106a.jpg

[ March 29, 2002: Message edited by: Dr. Bang ]

[P'tit Ben]

Nice! I really like the colors.

Perhaps some background could be useful to indicate where is the up side. Because I cannot tell if she's bending on the side or if it is a picture done like a camera shot with some rolling on the side.

Depending on the answer, her hair could be moved a little in the direction of the gravity.

I would really like this drawing if she was smiling but I already like a lot...

But all of this tings are merely suggestions, as you posted it in the Finished Works Forum. So I imagine you won't touch it anymore

[Novacaptain]

It looks unfinished...almost like you gave up on it.

The hair could use some highlights and the clothes could use some more folds. The way they are now they look like they're made from brown clay.

Some more contrast could add to the depth of your picture.

The face looks nice but there is practically no expression...what are her emotions at this moment? I think the mouth and chin might not be aligned with the rest of the face.

Keep it up

[Lunatique]

Hey Banger!

She's a pretty girl.

The others' comments are very good, pretty much the same things I was thinking.

You might want to refine her hair(including her eyebrows) more. On an attractive girl, little details like that makes a difference.

Her chin is too short, her lips are too far to the right and her right jawline is missing.

You forgot the cast shadows.

The sudden drop in contrast away from her head is too abrupt.

The buttons on her coat is too small. The way it's buttoned together and the cut of the jacket is awkward. Where the two sides meet, there should be a button holding them together. The two sides should also be symmetrical.

Her right shoulder is a bit much.

Her tie is way too skinny. Even a skinny tie would not be that small.

The cuff of her sleeve would probably be turned towards the front, not down.

I started doing an overpaint, but found myself noodling too much(my bad habit. ), so I stopped and just indicated the problem areas.



Hope this helps!

Dude, I tried Global Operations today. Such a ripoff of CS. They just want a piece of the pie, seeing how many people play CS.

Where's your version of the podbot chats for me?? I want them!

[ March 29, 2002: Message edited by: Lunatique ]

[Dr. Bang]

Thanks for much for the C&C guys!

P'tit Ben: Yes! the original horizon was confusing, i was trying to make it circular but it doesnt make any sense to the viewer. I modified the horizon to linear now, which is easier to understand whats going on

Smilling is really hard to modified once already flattened everything. But i did gave her a small tiny smirk

Novacaptain: You horrible monster, how you could say that to me! J/K Yes, i gave up on it, because i REALLY don't know what more I could add or tweak to the pic. But now you mentioned them, i worked on it more! I did everthing you said master!

Lunatique: I was working on Ben and Novacaptian's idea and you posted arrived. Very convience for me! So in addition, I've fixed just about everything you said to my pic!

Global Operation suck! I havent play it yet but i think it suck!!!!!! CS is still #1!!

Go on ICQ and i'll send you! I've been waiting for you since last night, you get me all horny and stuff!

[Mharett]

hehe cool, i like her hair color. she reminds me of the chic from 'bedazzled' that played satan. keep it up

[P'tit Ben]

hehehe! GREAT!

Can't wait to see the modified version

[jasonN]

Looks great Dr Bang! Lunatique and the others made some good points. Don't think there's much else to say!

[Freddio]

Yes I think I noodled too much

umm yea I mainly concentrated on the lighting, the pic appeared to be a bit too bland with very few shadows, I always love dynamic lighting though you may not but yea, anyway also fiddled with hair and face..


great pic though, really think the body is well done the face needs a little bit of work.

[Radiater]

That's a very helpful paintover Freddio for me too. Nice to see how someone would apply some of the things I was thinking.

[Dr. Bang]

Freddio you F*cking GENIOUS! Your version makes mine look like a piece of crap hehe! Your color choice is incredible! OMGSDJKLFSDJKLSDJKSDFDS I have to go back and fix mine right now!!!!!! Thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much for the repaint

[Novacaptain]

Hey, well that's pretty, Freddio. Nice to see you've found a way to continue it Bang.

I don't mean to be a monster (I know you were joking about it, don't worry), I just don't filter my thought-to-keyboard process too much because it feels wrong to hold back a thought that might be useful to you and others.

[Dr. Bang]

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Originally posted by Novacaptain:
Hey, well that's pretty, Freddio. Nice to see you've found a way to continue it Bang.

I don't mean to be a monster (I know you were joking about it, don't worry), I just don't filter my thought-to-keyboard process too much because it feels wrong to hold back a thought that might be useful to you and others.

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No problem Novacaptian! I love your critique, so does many others (look at your rating) So please don't hold back on what you gonna say, whoever offend at C&C are idiots!

I edited my pic again hehe, but Freddio one still rox!!!!!

[Malachi Maloney]

Keep up the good work bro.


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[P'tit Ben]

BAng, I must say I like your new version. And I admit also Freddio's overpaint is really instructive about lighting

Nice works guys !

[ANN]

A good job! She looks like the girl in Final Fantasy!I like it.

[Pat]

Wow, Bang. You're getting better. I can see the progress.

-Pat

[roundeye]

thats super bloody sweet dude.

[notic]

great stuff , _very_ nice paintover from you Freddio, interesting colors!