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Rorsh
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 Posted: Wed Mar 27, 2002 8:59 pm |
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Tried to focus more on my weakness with lighting on this one.
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swampbug
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| Posted: Wed Mar 27, 2002 10:22 pm |
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| I like the darkness.. the one thing that really makes this pic inconsistant is the hair. It doesnt posses the same type of line strokes along his muscles. ( the ones all going in the same direction) I would fix the hair up. Other than that, the rest is nit picky aesthtetics. (sp?) |
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Marakaz Buzjuz
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| Posted: Thu Mar 28, 2002 2:42 am |
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| whats up with his right leg? |
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Soulfuct
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| Posted: Thu Mar 28, 2002 5:58 am |
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Ror the lighting looks good to me.
Regarding his leg that is leaning outwards, it looks broken/deformed...who knows..something of that nature.I think your egsadurated features theme you use for skinning clashes with your paintings.
All in all I really love your stuff Ror and I feel you got the lighting aspect of this done top notch.
Keep up the good work man |
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Rorsh
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| Posted: Thu Mar 28, 2002 10:47 am |
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yeah i see what you mean about the leg, the original sketch was done 7 years ago and a lot of my bad comic art style carries over still from then.
I was really focussing on the lighting. I'm trying to deal with each of the problems i have from a combination of skinning and comic art.
Its slow, but i can see more clearly what a big rut ive been in for years now.
thanks for the input.
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