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mira · Posted: Tue Mar 26, 2002 5:57 am

please give me some comments

[ March 26, 2002: Message edited by: mira ]

P'tit Ben · Posted: Tue Mar 26, 2002 8:26 am

OK, do not be mad at me for those comments. I am really honest with what I feel

The first thing that hit me when I saw the picture was the spiderman shirt. Your Venom guy grabs it and the shirt seems like goo : the fold are not propoagating on the rest of the shirt, and are not exagerated like it would be for a person weighting around 80 kg hanged by the shirt.

the second thing that shocked me was the lensflare for its sharpness. All your drawing is fuzzy, and the lensflare is all neat. In that case I would suggest to avoid the flare until the drawing is less fuzzy (that means also that you should improve the sharpness of the image)

The white reflections "balls" on the upper parts of the bodies are misplaced. And they look like only some white balls hanging there, not related to any lighting. They should be more related to the highlighten colors of the body.

Except from that I like the point of view. The body could be worked so that they fit better in perspective especially for some body parts, but it is merely a problem of anatomy, something I cannot help you with

something is bothering me with Venom right hand. It seems he has no thumb, and 5 fingers

The lighting is quite nicely done anyway and as I said, I like the point of view and the characters stances. And I realize the overall must have required a lot of work, that gives finally I think a well executed image.

I hope this helps

apocalypse newt · Posted: Tue Mar 26, 2002 10:53 am

i basically like the painting its good -shows alot of talent - but i have to agree with most of his points - plus i hate those lense flares i think they make any image look tacky - maybe just me -but overall its damn good!

el scoono · member Member # Joined: 17 Jan 2002 Posts: 155

i think you have an interesting composition going on here, but i agree with all the previous comments.

also, (this is purely my opinion) i'm not a big fan of digital art that looks airbrushed. things tend to look too smooth and have a "plastic" appearance. the saturation on your colors seems a little high as well.

but overall, i think you're off to a good start.

mira · Posted: Tue Mar 26, 2002 7:15 pm

thanks guys....i like your comment....

and i will learn more to improve my skill...
and thaks guys....