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Hippie
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 Posted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 3:20 pm |
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Hello everyone,
I finshed this about a week ago.
Would love to get some crits and comments on it good or bad.
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jesusclone
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| Posted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 3:36 pm |
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I'd like to see more definition in the highlights personally. Looks good though. I don't understand why Demons get all the chicks though =L must be their tounges I guess 
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The Magic Pen
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| Posted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 7:38 pm |
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| It looks good..but I have an issue with the messiness of the detail because the picture has so much potential . The face needs to be sharpned up a bit more so it's smooth and sharp!! Your lighting over all is a bit drab. I think about Mullins paintings and how dramatic the lighting is..look at his stuff and think about how the lighting can help to make the painting pop!! Super nice work ..but please sharpen up the deails if you can the pic is almost there!!! |
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madmouth
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| Posted: Sat Mar 23, 2002 10:01 am |
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| honestly, this picture would work so much better if you made the girl correspond to the picture. as it is, she looks too modern. she looks like some model from a magazine in 2002 standing in an ancient set. you need to make her body and position and general attitude correspond to the time period of your picture, or at least make it so she doesn't seem like a blatant magazine reference. |
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Hippie
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| Posted: Sun Mar 24, 2002 9:00 am |
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Jesusclone:
Maybe it is their tongues. Actually the highlights and contrast are there but I am having some problems when I save files to jpg. I can't seem to keep good darks in the pic.
The Magic Pen:
Hey thanks, I can see what you mean about the messiness. I alwasy either seem to over work my stuff or under work. I will try to look at this one again.
madmouth:
I'm not sure what you emant by your comment. This is a friend of mine who posed for this pic as reference so it is not a magazine picture. I'm not sure if you were trying to give a suggestion or what? As for making her fit more with the scene I think that is lighting and now that I look at this again maybe some more detail as was pointed aout above.
Oh well I guess this goes back to the get to work on pile. Thanks for the comments everyone.
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