[n8]

Umm..this is my raver chick...i was inspired after ...well..waddaya know.. a rave. I would have made the image smaller..but you wouldnt see the pretties if i did that..its 80% of the original size...
umm..what else...its 4.30am...ive been at it all night...and...i lost 2 hrs work on this..accidently closed photoshop without saving...my bad >=(
anyways..enjoy..crits and comments welcome.
ps. no ref used...im pretty proud of that
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/female/Raver_Chick.jpg
i think her hand holding the bottle is kinda stuffed??..eh well..
umm...i hope i can link from deviant art??..hehe..too lazy to upload it else where

edit..i yoinked the thumnail that devi art made for me..hehehehe


[ March 23, 2002: Message edited by: n8 ]

[SplitSoul]

While your piece is good, THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS A QUALITY RAVER. When ever I come into contact with one, I feel compelled to lodge their goddamned glowstick up their ass. Fucking obnoxious bastards.

Ah, sorry, my train of thought kind of got derailed there.

[micke]

Hi..This came out a little sloppy, but i hope you see my point anyway. I focused on the pose and anatomy and proportions.
I also added a smile since Ravers are mostly happy people

It was hard to get a full impression of the picture because it was so big so i had to scroll up and down to see the whole. I would suggest posting the pic a little smaller next time..



-Micke

[[666]Flat]

Yo, Micke, lookin' good there. And SplitSoul, whuzzup? Did they cut off yer Prozac supply? I like those chicks. They could take care of ma blo- err, glowstick anytime.

[n8]

ahh..thanx for the overpaint and crits mike...ill fixie doodie her up in a couple of days
and splitsoul.. "Fucking obnoxious bastards" ??...lol..thatz coz theyre always on drugs..hehehehe

[micke]

Hi N8!
There are some anatomical issues:
The length of the fingers are the same.
Check the shape of the neck area. The ear looks a bit strange too. The thies(thigs? Excuse my poor English here) are too long.

Colours: The skin need stronger contrasts and is too Orange. Try to add more colour variations to the skin. It's not the same all over the body.
I see that you've shaded the nose, shading highligts, but it's too subtle. Also you could try to use harder brushes in some areas.

Other things are the bottle. It appears to be flat and it looks like the girl floats in the air because of the shadows underneath her feet.
Hope this can help

I could try to do a quick overpaint in order to show what i mean.

-Micke

[dARCKLOWN]

Ravers are gay, stupid and look like fucking morons.

Ok pic just gotta work on anatomy a bit more.