[yeshman]

Always so afraid to post here. You guys are so professional that it reminds me of how much a hack I am. I wanted to get some good opinions on this one though.

I feel like I'm improving technically all the time but I'm still not happy with how I am stylistically. I find my poses are too flat and My coloring lacks definition. Although, maybe its just because painter makes me lazy.

This one was done completely in painter from start to finish. I used the pencil tool for the line art, and colored using camel hair burshes. I find the camel hair brushes mix the paint well, but I'm not really satified with how I lose sharpness to the image.

Problems I know about:
1. Lines are still a bit sloppy
2. Somethings up with the legs and the lines around the knee area are pretty sloppy.
3. Face shading could be better. I should really look at some sort of reference when I do this sort of thing.

Well, here she is..
This is Kosmos from the game Xenosaga.
Pose was done from my head, but I used some references to get the costume right.

big version

[[666]Flat]

Maybe it's just me but those darn manga faces ruin every pic for me, even if they're executed brilliantly. Overwork her legs and it should be allrighty...

[P'tit Ben]

I have to admit legs could need some "tuning"

Exept from that I find the work from waist to head really excellent! nothing to say on that part! I really love.

Thanks for sharing that image

[NextGen]

manga/anime is the shiz. nice work how could anyone not like big eyes small mouth?