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Shaheen · Posted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 6:54 am

Hi everybody
I am so glad to join you in this forum and i hope you like my art... soon i will add more art..

so tell me what do you think of my drawings.

hunter_rose0 · Posted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 7:21 am

The line art looks good and has a nice comic book style. It's a cool action scene and has a dynamic composition. However the colouring needs a lot of work. Honestly, how long did you spend on the colour? Try shading your characters. Shading is the most important thing that you have to work on at this point, think about the light source and lay down some shadow paterns on your characters, you'll be amazed at the improvment. Use more than just one colour for an item that you may think is only one colour (you only used one green for the monster, one fleshtone for the guy...). Also using the soft airbrush is ok, but try to use hard edged brushes around the edges of the outlines and for cast shadows.

Gil Agud�n · member Member # Joined: 14 Feb 2002 Posts: 103

I like the movement on this one, very dynamic

Agrajag · member Member # Joined: 03 Mar 2002 Posts: 93

I agree with what has already been said. The motion in the image is very good, and I really like how you modelled the guy's arms. However, that streak of blood takes considerably away from the general dynamic flow in the pic, IMHO.
Being a modem user, this image gave me a hard time to load. It seems to me that almost 200 kB is rather generous for the relatively small image...

Shaheen · Posted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 1:02 pm

Wow.. thank u guys for all ur notes..
Hunter.. you are great... your notes are very important to me and to be honest with you i colored this pic in maybe 2 minutes only and it's just a sketch!

Thanks Gil..Also
thank u Agrajag
sorry for loading hard

i will try next time to make it smooth!
kahboom ... i like this devil tool

how about this one

kahboom · Posted: Sat Mar 23, 2002 12:21 am

Airbrush is the devil! Nice sense of motion.

Welcome aboard, btw.