[clawfist]

made this today while listening to SOAD



I still seem to lack the patience necessary to do sth more complex..

I know its not all cleaned up inside the bold outlines but I liked the more unfinished look to it, cause it feels more dynamic IMO

ah well, dunno, constructive crits welcome and appreciated

[el scoono]

hey, i like the character you've drawn and the background texture works well too. I think the word disorder feels a little separated from the rest of the composition. maybe have some of the guy (his fist and part of his head) overlap "disorder". that would create depth and you'd have some interaction between the elements. also, you could go with a more condensed font and make "disorder" a little larger. i like it though, kind of a weird propaganda poster.

[clawfist]

thx for your feedback I'll have a go at what you suggested and try some things out

[SplitSoul]

Make the text disorderly.

I like your taste in music, by the way.

[clawfist]

heres the newer version, you were right about the font and its placement lookin much better this way I think

I also liked your poster-aspect, which I tried to emphasize a bit

splitsoul: hehe lookin more like disorder now?

[SplitSoul]

Absolutely awesome.

[el scoono]

yes! good work on the type. now it's part of the illustration. very cool.

[duality]

Type treatment is MUCH better... And agreed in regard to not cleaning the shading within the image anymore than has already been done. You'd loose the energy... disorder.