[pro-phet]

did this for an artbattle, hope my enemy doesn't see this here :/
here we go


would be glad to get some feedback, maybe about the lights, there may be some things wrong but i must say i am very happy with it, perhaps i am going to change some things, perhaps some flowers or clouds. feel free to comment i'll be thankfull

[ February 25, 2002: Message edited by: pro-phet ]

[ February 26, 2002: Message edited by: pro-phet ]

[pro-phet]

why does nobody ever post in my threats?! is it so bad or dont you even look in my threats?! its really confusing me and with the time i think you dont like me or my drawing is waaaaaaaaaay to bad for you guys

[tek9z]

chill dude!
not everbody lives in europe-
ever heard of time zones?
and I redrew your previous post remember?
anywayz: there's no emotion in your pic.
*add in the cook's close-up: his mouth
showing an evil grin or something.
*draw the eyes of the clown much more
afraid - like pure fear
*that close up with the blood is nice for a backdrop image but it doesn't really
explain a lot
- draw the knife going into the flesh (hehe)
*vary the sizes of your inserts more
put some contrast in them.
*and maybe add some more elements in the background or take away that horizon.
now it looks too weird.

there.. got yourself a reply and hey! over
here


[ February 25, 2002: Message edited by: tek9z ]

[Gil Agud�n]

that artbattle sounds fun!! never heard of that... and who actually wins?? the best drawing?? i love the cook on wheels character... hehe, great idea...
may i do some comments?
-why don't u try 2 imagine what r the characters feeling and then exaggerate it to the nth power, that way u will have a more dramatic image,
-also try that the close-ups really show something about the action and/or character personality... maybe a ming smile... some shadow of fear on the clowns face... u know what I mean
-also play with perspective, look for a more dramatic camera angle instead of that rather simple view.

keep on the good work and never get disappointed, remember that some people may like your art and some others may not� some ones may even try 2 hurt u� always listen 2 critics and comments, then take what u think might be helpful and forget the rest� but the must important thing is that u always try 2 improve yourself with each new image and always remember, that as long as u like it and u have fun doing it� that�s what really matters.

And u better start praying because if ur enemy has seen that image he�s going 2 fetch u for revenge hehe.

[[666]Flat]

Ganz sch�n krank, mein Lieber.

[jesusclone]

I would agree with what tek9z said.
but I don't really understand the context of the image myself :/

[pro-phet]

thnx for reply

ok for explanation
it is for an artbattle, means everybody draws a charackter and then he gets his enemy. then you have to draw how your charackter beats the other up, or any scene of the fight, so i took a bit of the fight, and the berbecu right after. thats the explanation to the scene
in future i will wait more for the replies
but often i open a threat and do not get any c&cs, this hurts

[pro-phet]

1st of all, all fights are shown in the forum, the artbattle is organised by, and then the members vote between 2 enemies, the winner comes in the next round, and all starts again with another enemy

i took some of your advices, here we go


did it a bit more like a comic, and i like the cloud some how, and the birds bring some peace in the scene. c&cs are more than welcome

[Gil Agud�n]

hahahaHAHH hAH much better!!