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Topic : "Aluna - my 2nd bit of CG art" |
Arc][Pello member
Member # Joined: 20 Jan 2002 Posts: 302 Location: UK
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 4:17 pm |
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She started out as a whole figure but i added so much detail to the face and hair that it became a seperate image all together, hope you like it.
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Arc][Pello member
Member # Joined: 20 Jan 2002 Posts: 302 Location: UK
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 4:20 pm |
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can you guys see it? damn freeserve keeps messing me about. |
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Anthony J member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 412 Location: Oakville
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 5:17 pm |
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the girls eyes are too far apart, there should be one "eye" distance in the middle of the two eyes. All you do is take the right eye, measure that distance, and put that space in between the two eyes.
Also your mouth is too small. The creases at the edge of the mouth should measure almost exactly into the middle of each eye. If you measure vertically from the edge of each side of the mouth, and go up, you'll see that the middle section of each eye should match up. Just check any mugshot photograph of a real person and you'll see what i mean.
Other than that, I think your colour scheme is pretty cool, the hair is probably the best thing done on this piece.
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Member # Joined: 20 Jan 2002 Posts: 302 Location: UK
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 5:30 pm |
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hey thanx, yeah the mouth is all wrong on this, but im still getting used to doing faces and all. thanx for all those measurment rules, ill have to use them in the future. |
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