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gArGOyLe^
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hey Rob! Had to laugh hard at your comment! 
the picture is nice, as I said! |
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Neo-MatrixX
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| Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2002 4:00 pm |
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EH
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Borstj
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| Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2002 4:39 pm |
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she has a lot of pubichair  |
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Shaded
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| Thats a loincloth, genius. |
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MoleculeMan
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| Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2002 6:59 pm |
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| suuuuuure it is |
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Robert Ashley
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| Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2002 7:37 pm |
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Taff, thanks. I usually dont get any comments on this board at all....so I was shocked to see that I got 8 replies!!!!
I just said type "A" because I guess I am a little bit full of myself as well. I feel I should get an "A" for the pic....although, I guess I need to fix her loincloth...as well as add some knuckles on the left hand....and I also noticed that her right ankle is in the wrong place.
If anyone else sees some MAJOR mistakes...please dont hesitate to say so.
Anyway, I get the pubic hair comment a lot on this image....I guess I need to give it a design or something so that its more appearent as to what it is.
[ February 16, 2002: Message edited by: Robert Ashley ] |
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Robert Ashley
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| Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2002 12:20 am |
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Nobody has to comment....just reply with the letter "A" if you see this post
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Strawberrysauce
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| Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2002 12:30 am |
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| A - like the lighting on her back |
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Liser Studios
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| Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2002 12:44 am |
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topeira
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A, first of all 
ilove the coloring. i think it's great but there are some issues with the figure, if ya dont mind -
1) the lower jaw isweird sincce it looks like it connects straight to the ear...
2) her left hand looks like a hand shaped cookie. too flat. no knuckles. no charecter
3) the thighs are way too fat for her figure. they should be thickest around themiddle-begining and thinest around the knee.
4)also the outline is too shaky. ya know? not solid and straight... i dunno. u get what im trying to say?
basically it looks good. apealing
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Novacaptain
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| Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2002 11:21 am |
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A- The edges look all wobbly...smoothen them that is, unless you're going for the celulitic beastly chick look.
If you removed the hair around the ear how would it look? Is it attatched properly? Is the jaw the right shape? ...think about it.
nice picture - I don't care much for the background though |
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Robert Ashley
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| Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2002 11:54 am |
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Thanks! I didnt even notice the ear!!! You guys are right...its needs to be up and to the right a bit.
As far as the left hand goes...I already knew about need more detail...I kinda rushed it.
About the back ground...I am still very terrible with trying to create textures in photoshop...Does anyone know a "quick hack" at how to make nice textures? Is there some kind of filter or plug in...or do I have to create my textures with paper and charcoal then scan it?
I will work on my lines...for some reason, I can not draw lines straight with my tablet and photoshop...they always look a bit wiggly. I need more practice on that.
Thanks for the comments, I will work on it more and then post it again fixed. Let me know if you see any other major flaws that need to be rectified...This way I can fix everything at the same time. |
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Spectra
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| Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2002 4:31 pm |
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Interesting lighting on the back, it overall look nice, but some parts are too smudgy/blury (ei: feet and many part of the skin could be sharper/have more details.)
Guillaume Le Tual |
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LuxoNick
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| Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2002 1:51 pm |
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| thats one hell of a big bush! |
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