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sliver fish
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2002 6:06 pm     Reply with quote
these are some of my life drawings from this year..
any crits would be great! =)
















the first 5 are one minutes.. then a five min, 10 min and the last one is a 15 min..

[ February 15, 2002: Message edited by: sliver fish ]
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Anthony J
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2002 11:39 pm     Reply with quote
im no champion, but id say you need to work on your line quality...keep practicing
practice makes almost perfect !
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tek9z
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2002 2:38 am     Reply with quote
that linework is fine!
just the sketches you need to be
an animator and such with emphasize
on gesture and 'powerlines'.
you just keep doing those!!!
(maybe the last one is too overworked..)
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sliver fish
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2002 1:15 pm     Reply with quote
Anthony J : haha yeah the practice never ends...

tek9z: thanks. for 15 minute poses i just dunno what to do.. so i guess i work over it too much..
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Robert Ashley
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2002 7:59 pm     Reply with quote
These are great...Its good that you are so loose with the lines. Although, if these are 15 minute sketches, you should have some rendering going on...the lines are just guides so that you can start blocking everything in with shading.

Its good work though...your proportions seem pretty accurate.
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