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eyre
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2002 11:08 pm     Reply with quote
So I finally decided to try drawing an animal, with all the shading and stuff, and came up with this (my first attempt):



I consider this piece finished, but would love any suggestions to take into consideration next time =)

(Reference grabbed from a photodisc stock photography magazine I got in the mail)
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swampbug
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2002 12:06 am     Reply with quote
Good attempt.. I think it'll look more photoreal if you get a few perportions better. The hairline at the top is crookde maybe? And that dark mark area in between his eyes looks too harsh.

for the most part.. keep up the good work.
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