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Snoogie junior member
Member # Joined: 26 Jan 2002 Posts: 2
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Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2002 7:43 am |
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hello
this is the first painting I ever did
C&C very welcome
Cheers
Snoogie
[ February 12, 2002: Message edited by: Snoogie ]
[ February 12, 2002: Message edited by: Snoogie ] |
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Prometheus-ANJ member
Member # Joined: 06 May 2001 Posts: 157 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2002 2:39 pm |
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Colors looks ok, perhaps I'd like to see some hueshifts and reflective lighting tho. The BG is a bit flat and boring (too big). Try to simplify the strokes and avoid blury airbrush strokes.
Also, the form of the apple looks a bit odd, especially at the bottom. Apples are rather round.
I think I've seen a tutorial with an apple just like this. The blue spot showing thu reminded me of it. |
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gArGOyLe^ member
Member # Joined: 11 Jan 2002 Posts: 454 Location: USA
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Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2002 2:50 pm |
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yeah.. I think that tutorial is on the seeg site
nice job.. keep painting.. |
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