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Author   Topic : "Cube from Jet Grind Radio - completed"
Kuren
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2002 3:38 pm     Reply with quote


I finally completed this. I apologize for posting this pic like 3 times. I needed help at certain intervals during the making of this pic. Good to know other people see that which you don't see yourself...

Crits and comments always welcome.
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geoman2k
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2002 4:05 pm     Reply with quote
pretty cool man. only prob i have with it is the black square-ish thing in the background... it distracts from the form of the charactor. either lighten it a whole lot, or get rid of it completely. or paint an entire background :P

i like the writing on the wall, reminds me of that song by Cold
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jasonN
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2002 4:14 pm     Reply with quote
hey Kuren, just wanted to say that I love the perspective and dynamics of the pic. really nice stuff
Some of the outlines seem a bit jagged and rough, like the tips of her boots and along the right thigh (our left). But these are just minor things, overall it's really good.
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gArGOyLe^
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2002 4:16 pm     Reply with quote
wow.. I like ..
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Fate
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2002 5:47 pm     Reply with quote
SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET

You should do like a group pic of JGR

I like the game too
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Kuren
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2002 11:03 pm     Reply with quote
geoman2k - I meant the bg to be a cube like bg, thus reflecting the girl's name; Cube. I would paint an entire bg, but it wasn't planned at first and there was something I didn't like about her when I tightend the line art. So I just said "blah" to it. The text actually IS the song "Just Got Wicked" by Cold. lol It was the inspiration for this pic.

jasonN - Actually yeah, I did a poor job of isolating the line work from the bg. I'll do a better job next time.

Thx for the comments everybody.
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ken
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 11, 2002 9:05 am     Reply with quote
hey, that's fantastic. i like the motion effects.

i agree with geoman, you could probably tint the background light blue or mustard. you could also add some burn effects on the light streaks so they look more like light.

i just bought a dreamcast, trying to hunt this game down second hand...

-Ken
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NextGen
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 12, 2002 10:20 am     Reply with quote
can rubber/plastic on concret make sparks?
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Cyberjobe
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 13, 2002 12:20 am     Reply with quote
I just don't like the font, does not look like if it was air brushed.

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