[KeLLuSioN]

Thsi is my rpg character Kloe, in ehr older form. She kinda swtches ages as she please, usually taking the rold of a silly little girl, but in this form she's a little more mature. ^_^

c&c would be great.

[Pat]

Her eyes aren't too symmetrical. You might want to try flipping the canvas and looking at the image in reverse. That can really help you spot errors like that. Also, the hair along the side of her head almost looks like it's coming out of her ears. Maybe if you clarified that a bit it would avoid some unusual readings of your piece.

I do like the luscious colors though --they harmonize great.

-Pat

[KeLLuSioN]

thanks Pat ^_^ I had a little trouble with the eyes, but flipping horizontally did seem to help... they might be a little better now, i hope It would have even better I think If i had done that earlier on while i was working on it, rather than trying to fix it after. as for the hair, I might do a little more detail later with it.