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Zekie
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 12:50 am     Reply with quote


came out all anime/manga-ish... I guess that is just my style... I think the shading is like.. wrong.. but I tried.. I hope i get some comments..
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Samson & Friends
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 1:28 am     Reply with quote
I think it's excellent.

The eyes are superb, as are the lips. The face is a little assymetrical, but makes for a more interesting image as opposed to if it was perfectly even. I like the bones at the base of her neck.

I don't see any problem with the shading, but I'm no expert.
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Xyster21
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 1:50 am     Reply with quote
I kinda got out of the manga type drawing and into my own lil fuzzy world but your drawing looks pretty slick
Shading problem with the shoulders though... its like everything else is shaded lightly and all the sudden theres all this shading and doesn't look like anything is really bulging out that much for that much shading. :P just my 2 pennies worth of it
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po9o
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 2:59 am     Reply with quote
very nice.
i love the eyes adn especially the mouth/lips...

very well done
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NullTygre
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 5:13 am     Reply with quote
the eyes pretty much ruined it
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horstenpeter
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 5:18 am     Reply with quote
It is really nice, but the manga eyes don't go well with the realistic style of the rest of the picture. But nice work.
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Dr. Bang
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 10:33 am     Reply with quote
Nice!! Glad to see you back too!
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gekitsu
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 11:28 am     Reply with quote
ain't she sweet?
i don't think the eyes ruined it.
from your eyes, i'd say you like to draw manga and it's fine that these roots shine through, even in a quite realistic image.
it's a well done composition of realism, "classic" comic and manga. i like it.
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 11:32 am     Reply with quote
Oooh, I like that. Its a really nice drawing, the lips are my favorite part... and the simplicity of the hair.

One thing I notice is that half of her face looks mean while the other has a puppy dog innocence about it. If you hold up a sheet of paper to cover up half her face you'll see what I mean. Because of that there is something a little odd about her expression, which could be a good thing too I guess. I dunno

Anyway... nice work!
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Zekie
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 29, 2002 12:09 am     Reply with quote
yeah.. I draw too manga-ish... and have been drawing like that for the longest time... so it is kinda in my blood... I try to get into realism.. but only realism I could do is in the shading.. which I still need to improve on. THanx for all the comments. I'll try my best into realism.. but not sure if I could do it..
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