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Author   Topic : "Seeds from outer space"
Mime
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2002 4:40 pm     Reply with quote
its an illustration of a short novel where a guy finds seeds from another planet, and 2 human-plant things are growing, a male and a female. The female plant and the hero fall in love, and the male plant is very jealous, i tried to illustrate this part ...
the size asked by the teacher is a4 portrait.

here is the linework


and here os the finished version, ink washes and white crayon



comments and critics are welcome.
and if anyone want to try to color the linework, dont hesitate =)
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swampbug
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2002 11:27 pm     Reply with quote
Really nice.. Tells a story too.

As for a crit... the back of her neck can be made slimmer to give a more feminine look. The ink wash seams unfinished. you got that sun a BLAZIN.. maybe make some harsher contrasting highlights around the rims of your subject matter.

good pics though !..
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 25, 2002 10:33 am     Reply with quote
haha... new line of toys I can see. Cabbage patch chicks ! :P
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