[Twincruiser]

Hey all,

Here's a piece done by Corey Lewis. We inked and colored it.
http://www.tbns.net/twincruiser/rey.html

Pencils by Corey Lewis
Inks by Michel
Colors by Ren�

What do you think?

[Novacaptain]

The colors look nice, though some things are a little off. The light on the pants looks to "specular" and should probably be more diffused. The shadow along the line on the jeans make it look like there's a deep groove alongside his pantleg.

The background picture (blue) has a error on the projected shadow from the hair (since the light is coming from the right).

I, personally, am not too fond of the yellow/orange clouds in the background. Maybe a flat (light) color would have made a better frame...

Since the line art isn't yours I'll spare you the comments on the grotesque anatomy.

It's a style thing I suppose. It doesn't, however, help in building accurate notions of human proportions.

[Twincruiser]

Here's another link to the pic.
http://www.comixmatrix.com/members/...e.asp?id=859845

[Twincruiser]

Here's the good link.
http://www.comixmatrix.com/members/works/image.asp?id=859845