[fragbait]

i tried to draw my own eyes out and then sorta got carrued away
need some critics



Fragbait

"Videogames are like underwear, you get attatched to the good one's but have to change them eventually"

[ January 19, 2002: Message edited by: fragbait ]

[fragbait]

some1 tell me whats wrong in thsi, i gotta submit this for an assignment....

[Svanur]

I ain't no expert, but you should try to refine it more, currently it's a little blurry. You might also think about changing those shadows, they are too dark imo.

You could also sheck out Jezebel's Eye tutorial. Lot of useful things there that you could add to this picture.

Hope this helps

[Tinusch]

There are three things that I notice that could use work. First, it's all very blurry. Use a solid brush and define the edges. Second, the cropping is a little odd. Looks like you're wearing a ninja costume. I would recommend either turning that window into a rectangle or making it fade to dark a little more gradually. Third, the left eye (our right) looks really good, but then toward the left of the picture the quality starts going down a little. It shows that a lot of work was put into that eye, with all the different colors worked in and the whole thing shaded and defined well. But then the rest of the picture looks like an afterthought, like it's just a quick dodge/burn job rather than a real rendering like the eye.

[Sukhoi]

It looks really good! The eye in focus is excellent. However I would like to see the rest of his face or atleast something other than "he's a ninja"!

Also if you change your title to something written in common grammar, and not in caps, I think you would get more answers. Also try not to sound as demanding as you are, that will not help you.

Artists are sensitive you know?!

That's what i've got to say for now.

Sukhoi

[Tinusch]

I don't think my second point was very clear. Here's what I meant...